reflection part III

Hi!
we meet again in my blog :)
very exciting to study with you, guys..
Okay, go to the main purpose, my reflection.

there were some points that I got on yesterday writing course and also on the previous meeting.

• Previous meeting
  We was given assignment by Miss Vita, that is to write a narration paragraph, and we have discussed about it in the class.
  Miss Vita divided us into several groups and then Tri Rahma Dina Yanti became my partner. She commented on my paragraph, and so did I. It was interesting :) Dina's paragraph is good. The plot from the beginning until the end of the paragraph's very clear. Good Job, Dina!
  I think she can be an author.
  
•  Yesterday's meeting
  There were 4 persons who presented their paragraph in front of the class yesterday. Putri, Yogi, Okta and me. An Interesting discussion happened yesterday, and there are some points we can conclude.
  @putri's presentation:
  She presented about comparative and process analysis paragraph and it was very clear, but Miss Vita said that process analysis paragraph should be in the form of paragraph like the other types.
  @Yogi's presentation:
  actually he presented his paragraph well, because he was really confident.
  important point: you may not modify paragraph, because each paragraph on an article, text, essay, has their own main idea.
  @my presentation: illustration paragraph give detail about a topic, but it not really specific, and usually give example. then descriptive paragraph is clearer and give more detail about a topic to the reader so they can imagine it.
  @Okta's presentation: we may not take the whole sentence to make it as topic sentence, we can make it by our own words..

okay, I think that all.

wish we can be better :)